Action Plan Based on Feedback


Based on the feedback we received from our audience when showing them our rough cut of our film opening we agreed on 4 major improvements we can make to improve our film.


1- Lengthen the shot of the zombie being shot as it's to quick to see anything. 
2- Sort out the size of the Cinematic Bars as they are quite large and take a lot of the screen up on a big screen.
3- Sort out the News Broadcast fade out as they are loud and fade too abruptly.
4- Could maybe find some more realistic names for the titles? 

Not major ones that need to change or sort out, but ideas:

-The sequence of the establishing shots is unconventional yet it works
-The main title could come after everything near the end of the opening
and finally, 
-The news bulletins could come at the start as it might help with the back story. 
So overall we could try re-ordering the sequences of a few clips.